Before The End Comments

wonderful....you write beautifuly i like your style....keep writing and tell me when you write a new poem.

a touchy but reflective poem! excellent wording! 10+

I've been dreading death for so long time, and after reading yours, I guess, I should love my life now! !

A Very touching poem! Hope it 's not your story!

have lived my life so free I guess this was meant to be I am scared and lonely If only I could see you once more Before I pass through death's door My dream would come true I Love You a romantic and enough menigful poem... really done well and seems to my wrote it from the core of your sweet heart and you love someone very much..best for you..its really a good poem..liked and loved it..

well i hope this is not you but it is an excellent poem...

Deborah, I enjoyed this poem. We all reach the end of our days, I believe there is a part of me that never changes, unlike my body which is aging. Enjoy the now moments of your life. Bob

Hi Deborah, Is this fiction or bio? It's certainly full of emotion. Frank

excellent expression.........cheers sir.

Hmmm, so sweet.... You sure know how to expressed your self

I often ponder upon death in truth because I try to fathom why we learn so much during life for it all to be wiped out by oblivion....I'm not religious. Of course I wont know till I get there. Sometimes it is good to put down how we feel about this subject which with lots of folk is a little taboo. An interesting and thought provoking verse. Thankyou Ruth

Since all have to die There is no need 2 cry To brood over n look back The whole life through a crack Pick up memories n things To meet the challanges The next birth brings

very touchy! nicely penned! .....10+

Dear Deborah. Very moving poem, very universal subject, as we all must go through death's door, as you put it. Strange to be lonely going where everyone goes, but truly we all go alone. I believe death is a dreamless sleep, from which we do not awake. An un-knowing, never ending end to the individual concerned. This comforts me, old atheist that I am, and I would that it comfort you. I have accompanied many to death as a hospice nurse, and peace without worry or pain is the best gift of all.

And I love ur poems....nice, sweet, short, full of love n passion...though it talks about, death, I think its full of life Nikunj

very nice poem touched my heart may god bless you and you live happily forever10++++++