Before The Dawn Comments

Beautiful poem… The concept of Easterlies driving the ‘morning chill' westward is novel. Enjoyed.

i KIND OF LIKE THIS. 'PURCHASE', AS IN 'AN OBTAINING' (OF SOMETHING) ? here i guess referring to obtaining a look at the pink sky. : ) : ) BRI

clouds trimmed in rosy piping which dress the sky at dawn. i love these lines in your poem.... wonderful diction and the use of words... marvelous.. thank you dear Mary the poetess. tony

A Time for Stars! Golden Moon at the centre of Eastern Sky With a bright Star above shines glorious Like in the full Moon time even today sure! Night has settled now with calmness every- Where making it very cold before mist full Formation to go on all the night before all! Before dawn breaks out clearing all darkness Ruling the whole night, it's the time for Stars To draw symbols in constellations far above! All Greek mythological and ancient Indian Group of Stars making zodiac symbols..... Saying all about each one's status and future! All thoughts of past, present and future surely Occupy all as long as all Stars never diminish!

it's before in my place and it's total darkness

Wonderfully expressed poem Mary. Loved all it! Congrats

By far the best of today's three poems of the day! Congratulations!

I can just imagine chill from the wind! It was a night! ! !

Before dawn wind rushes driving night’s chill westward

The hope for the new day that carries us through the night

Another beautiful painting with word! - Rj Nandy

dear mary, i really love these two lines: clouds trimmed in rosy piping which dress the sky at dawn.

Mary, I have read about everthing you have written and I must tell you I have been moved You had quality of word that touches the heart. I appreciate your impressions and hope all is well at your house. Again I thank you very much for your comments on what I've tried to share, God, Family, Friends and Country come in that order with me. May I call you a new friend? Please keep writing its appreciated.

Perfect Mary. This poem sums up the reasons I'm often found walking into the dawn along Mounts Bay Seashore in Cornwall. Good for the heart, good for the soul! Thank You.

This is absolutely wonderful.

Mary! now this strikes a chord in my heart, beautiful. Love David

Wonderful poem! Yesterday I took a photo of the pre-sunrise and your poem describes it in beautiful words. I was going to write a poem about it but you have said it perfectly.

'Clouds trimmed in rosy piping' I Love that line and all the rest as well. Wonderful.

Beautiful poem Mary, you paint a picture with every line. Andrew 10!

Breathtakingly beautiful. Thanks.