Tuesday, September 2, 2014

Before The Big Bang Comments

Rating: 5.0

What sparked the Big Bang?
Should we give a dang
how the experts debate
as to what might predate
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Harley White
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Chinedu Dike 14 August 2021

A compelling and descriptive piece of poetry written in verse with rhythmic splendour........

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Bill Cantrell 24 October 2018

There are those that don’t care of the before but we would all be forced to admit, our roots are tied to that gulf of which we cannot explain, I find myself here too, yes..with that fantasy spree of drifting into that fathomless past.this is no place for closed minds, and absolutes must bow in humility at what they may find....what a masterpiece of poetry, it should be poem of the day and year! ! I will recommend it to poemhunter!

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

oh! to MyPoemList. :) bri thanks for the Poet's Note.

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Harley White 16 January 2018

Thank you for your careful reading! I appreciate your comments...

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

but the answer to such a baffling question as how did 'it' all begin is not of interest to me. if God were to knock on our front door with a convincing proof of Her existence (now or in the past) , i MIGHT go to church again! and over coffee and cookies i could ask Her the 'question'. But, would She remember? She must be getting pretty OLD! ! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

more favorite lines: No, perchance the Big Bang just didn't befall. It might not have happened at all.................the poem is a tour de force, and i don't use that term lightly! in fact, i may NEVER have used it on PH before now, nor outside PH. :) (to be continued) ..

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2018

brane noun Physics an extended object with any given number of dimensions, of which strings in string theory are examples with one dimension. Our universe is a 3-brane...............Who knew? NOT BRI, me. some favorite lines: I've lived countless lives of fairytale scale, had fanciful dreams far beyond the pale, even conceived of scenario grand in multi-braned bubbled baffling land ...........(to be continued; my comment?) .....

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Jeremy Horsford 24 July 2016

Let's throw mud at a wall until something sticks. Interesting write.

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