Saturday, February 22, 2014

Before Taking A Bold Step! Comments

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Before taking a bold step
Take a good view of surroundings
Just after the step
If you realise you failed
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Yash Shinde 04 April 2014

When no choice left, running is the best option. As the words of love and peace cannot be ruminated by an angry bull! ................words filled with wisdom.great write.......... I cordially invite you to read my poem- - ...never look like one....I seek your valuable response...

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Sreelekha Premjit 08 March 2014

Interesting! ! ! beautifully penned...

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 February 2014

Very nice.The first stanza is beautiful.

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Neela Nath Das 27 February 2014

Geetha, this one is didactic! Very good advice to follow.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 February 2014

Don't turn back.nice line...10 even if so much is at sake it may be in form of cake but look not back

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Lyn Paul 25 February 2014

Wise words and to make us all realise that stepping back is okay. For often we look at things differently after the event

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Valsa George 25 February 2014

Yes, think twice before you act! Any rash step can lead one to his doom... Turning away from problems is no solution...Facing life boldly - there lies one's valour and victory! ! Great thoughts Geetha!

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Tribhawan Kaul 25 February 2014

I am not telling one to be a coward If you find yourself in front of angry bull When no choice left, running is the best option. As the words of love and peace cannot be ruminated by an angry bull! .....a very correct and sound advice. Intellect always wins over physique. Last stanza is telling. Show the mirror and let the truth comes out. Beautiful poem :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 February 2014

It so often happens in life, Geetha, ill-feelings are inflamed when it could be put out if one preferred to stay quiet. very pertinent observation.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 February 2014

Great imagery along with a bold truth spelt out here......Geetha.......really very inspiring...............

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Tadasha Tripathy 24 February 2014

Beautiful visions.I liked it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 23 February 2014

Yes it is better to avoid confrontation unless it becomes unavoidable. It is always better to visit a rumbling volcano after it has erupted! A nice and thoughtful poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 February 2014

mirror in our hand we can clean We can clean what is in hand. Nice. Thank you.

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Hans Vr 22 February 2014

A good advice, very well penned

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