Before Sleep Comes Comments

on't be sad before you fall asleep when you gather your thoughts don't squeeze your heart with your longing for the day.no u should not, cry and never. it will bring shame on you and your love...beautifully crafted poem..i liked it.....10 read mine... cry not... anywhere..... mary to marry.... virginity at stake..(latest one0

nice abstract poem, lovely to read.......10++

don't be sad before you fall asleep when you gather your thoughts don't squeeze your heart with your longing for the day so many good words the world is sending you as if it were saying 'don't cry no more' what a swet poem is this one..really enjoy a lot and let me say you are doing a great task...well done

don't be sad before you fall asleep when you gather your thoughts don't squeeze your heart with your longing for the day so many good words the world is sending you as if it were saying 'don't cry no more'..........donot cry over slit milk.. days thoughts must be given rest before you go to sleep..rejuvnate and feel fresh.. world is awaiting for your sun shine next day... lovely write. o admie it.....10 read mine thoughts....cry not....dead nights