Before Sleep. Comments
Those warm showers at night,
Which comfort us before sleep.
The kiss,
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A heartwarming poem that readies for sleep. Well constructed and executed.
There may not be anything off-beat about the subject of the poem but the way it has been treated and presented makes it a masterpiece. I also agree with what Robert and Howard have said about this poem. Just awesome.
Those times where we are alone. With everyone asleep in a place we call home. For we know what's really in our heart. May be the reason why we choose to part..love, desire, care, concern, to be loved. time, stress all these points come in, in your poem dear poetess. thank u for this poem. tony
You are most welcomed Tony I loved rereading the lines which touched you. You are welcomed and Thank you for reading.
Making meaningful the mundane is what great poetry is about. That you written on a subject so common in such a creative and captivating manner is commendable!
Oh my, thank you, it has been ages that I have been wanting to read a comment as descriptive as yours, thank you very much. I enjoyed this write, thought it was one of my good ones.
Making meaningful the mundane is what great poetry is about. That you written on a subject so common in such a creative and captivating manner is commendable.
A beautiful poem that captures moments of restlessness. Well crafted write.
Dear Safiyyah, your fine poem evokes the completeness of night.++10 Robert
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Before the day ends. The thoughts we keep to ourselves suspends. For we know what's really in our heart. May be the reason why we choose to part. we know what is really in our hearts. it is true. very true. tony