Thursday, November 19, 2015

Before She Says Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

She never looks at me anymore
At least not in the way she use to
Always seeming to be in thought
Always looking somewhere else
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Cecil (cj) Krieger
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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2015

This is very painful- experiencing the moment when your near and dear one is about to bid final adieu. Very poignant. Thanks, Cecil.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 19 November 2015

Yes it is very painful & something most of us have experienced... thank you so much for the comment... All my best, CJ

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 November 2015

Love too changes it's forms with passage of time like any other living being. In the changed circumstances it's expression too changes, however, it doesn't mean that it is on the wane and will soon disappear. A beautiful poem with smooth flow of emotions. Enjoyed reading the thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 19 November 2015

Thank you so very much for this kind comment. Wishing you all the very best... CJ

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Manonton Dalan 19 November 2015

before she says goodbye... I guess she already did? ? ? ?

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 19 November 2015

Well... if she didn't say goodbye, she most certainly is about to go: (Your comment is really appreciated.. Be Well, CJ

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Cecil (cj) Krieger

Cecil (cj) Krieger

Woodstock, NY
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