Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Before Or After... Alzheimers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dementia’s realness with no lifeline,
The burning desires spills its ashes
On reality thru the twilight years.
Memories struggle against the power
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Ken e Hall
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Walterrean Salley 11 October 2012

The nitty gritty of alzheimers. True facts. Witnesses it with an aunt, and also a dear friend. Very painful and unfortunate. Thanks Ken.

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Eric Cockrell 21 June 2011

touching, very real... went through this with my mother... like this poem very much.

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I of your blood, who love you so, Cannot let you go to the shuffle rooms of an Old peoples home. Your glazed eyes see thru me, Am I not real, a ghost her memory itself brings tears in eyes. evenreading this poem i cry such is universal character so wovenwith our flash and blood..10. read mine o, mother, mom i miss you, mmother and i wept..just reference

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Kesav Easwaran 18 June 2009

'Breakfast time approaches “Mum your tablets” You exude repetition “Before or after? ” “After mum, after'... touching scene Ken...visually eloquent lines...10

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this is a touchng poem about another world where dsome one can't be aware about the time the person or the place..a sad feeling..well done..10++++

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Godspower Oshodin 25 March 2009

this is pure muse, you're always moved by your muse.

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Chitra - 27 February 2009

heart wrenching write..sensitive and emotional

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

Very nice composition.

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Ken e Hall

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