Thursday, July 26, 2007

Before My Eyes Comments

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He comes on softly as he moves across the room before me
I can't resist, I'm hypnotized, I'm surrounded by him
I can't, I can't forget that face, and I will, I will go back to that place He stands before my eyes, right before my eyes
I can see the colours are coming one after another for me
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Cassandra Tucker
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Ana Monnar 28 July 2007

I can picture what you are saying. Excellent!

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