Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Before Morn Comments

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Before Morn
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Forward march she feared
As she saw a big storm gathering
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

A wonderful poem, our lives are in God's hands so there is no point in worrying too much, what will be, will be! !

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Salini Nair 16 October 2014

thus being restless instead Watch in silence thy wise way Bringing about results good or bad None could have predicted..............................awesome write..............i like the message

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful poem. I loved the way you presented it. Very true said, one has to believe in God, believe in self, even if the storm arise one can safely reach the shore. I know God loves us And the storm is in his hands Thus being restless instead Watch in silence thy wise way....Nothing can be predicted. Remaining calm in any situation is better than being restless. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

If we can strongly abide in God and believe that God will take care of us in all adversities, our unnecessary fears will vanish as a child feels ever secure in his father's or mother's hands! Great write!

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