Friday, July 24, 2009

Before Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today i am dead,
Tomorrow I'm alive,
Days seem to darken,
No help to survive,
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Danie Babcock
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 11 September 2009

well penned/ a moving poem highlights your talent. it touched me/

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Stephanie Starr 31 July 2009

Oh my gosh this poem made my cry. Its so sad and yet so stunning. The way you rhyme it is beautiful and unique, and it flows all the way through, which I find very hard to do.

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