Spring would come with shafts of light
To make love to dark earth in the morning dew,
But the frost would bite too deep at night
And the beds were all bare, before I met you.
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Very deep. Your work is intellectually profound. Great use of words! Brillant little diamond, Michael! Theo
This is a lovely work depicting love. Some beautiful images and lovely rhyming.
I can feel the splendor of love in your poem. This work is rhythmic and musical. Very well done.
This poem is very romantic and full of love.