Thursday, August 16, 2007

Before I Met You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spring would come with shafts of light
To make love to dark earth in the morning dew,
But the frost would bite too deep at night
And the beds were all bare, before I met you.
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Michael Buhagiar
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Ana Monnar 28 August 2007

This poem is very romantic and full of love.

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Theodora Onken 25 August 2007

Very deep. Your work is intellectually profound. Great use of words! Brillant little diamond, Michael! Theo

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Shaye Michaelson 23 August 2007

This is a lovely work depicting love. Some beautiful images and lovely rhyming.

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Jemarie Ragudo 16 August 2007

I can feel the splendor of love in your poem. This work is rhythmic and musical. Very well done.

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