Before I Die Comments

'Where's the horizon Where is the sky? ' - They both exist, but sometimes it is difficult to find. A poem that makes the readers put a pause and think, while reading. The last two lines are simply fantastic. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I heartily give it 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.

nice rhyming. YOU probably expect to " live" after you die, as well. I just hope, for your poet's-sake, you don't end up in..... bri :)

Outstanding words. Frightening and so real.

An excellent and impeccable write.......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

Yes, we want to live more before we die.. I am missing my late dad... Thank you for this poem. It reminds me about my late dad.