Monday, May 21, 2018

Before I Die Comments

Rating: ★5.0

One more damn breath
Before I die
With no more sun
And deadened sky
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Richard Wlodarski
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Susan Williams 21 May 2018

Simplicity plus brevity equals power. And this is an exceedingly powerful poem- every reader must feel its impact. You nailed the message with the tone you expressed it with. Top-notch.10+++++++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 21 May 2018

Wow! What a powerfully positive response! Love it! Thank you so much, Susan!

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Richard Wlodarski

Richard Wlodarski

France
Richard Wlodarski
Richard Wlodarski
France
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