Before I Die Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Before I Die

Rating: 5.0


One more damn breath
Before I die
With no more sun
And deadened sky

One more damn sigh
Before I die
One more damn word
Now to be heard

Monday, May 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 21 May 2018

Simplicity plus brevity equals power. And this is an exceedingly powerful poem- every reader must feel its impact. You nailed the message with the tone you expressed it with. Top-notch.10+++++++++++++++++++

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Wow! What a powerfully positive response! Love it! Thank you so much, Susan!

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