One more damn breath
Before I die
With no more sun
And deadened sky
One more damn sigh
Before I die
One more damn word
Now to be heard
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Simplicity plus brevity equals power. And this is an exceedingly powerful poem- every reader must feel its impact. You nailed the message with the tone you expressed it with. Top-notch.10+++++++++++++++++++
Wow! What a powerfully positive response! Love it! Thank you so much, Susan!