Before I Die................ Comments

i dont know lalitha; to me it is an devotional poem......the last stanza confused me as to what do you want to convey....if possible dear, kindly elaborate....yes, an extremwely devotional poem it is, i could be in your shoes....

wonderful theme....well done! ! ! poignant and well structured! ! !

fine write...............

you poem is good you made me cry i dont know why what makes you sad 10++++