Before I Am No More! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

this is a passionate piece of work...well done!

I have truly felt you, seen you and heard you I have tried you, tested you and acknowledged you All I want now is to embrace you..................................oh what a beauty of love creeping over the entirety by silky shadow of breath, yet it croons by wish of embrace, wrought ingenious by wonderfu imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

love blazes glory of grace and riffles the pages onto embrace, wonderful thought by the imagery, yet luscious flow on the rune of passion, eloquent, quite evocative too,10++++, thanks fotr sharing

fine poetry, , , real longing

lovely poem...emotion brought out well

lovely poem i like the way you brought so much feelings and thoughts into this poem.. You made it nice and strong but needs a bit of a foundation... Nice work krista