Monday, November 27, 2006

Before I Am Dead(Poetry Slam) Comments

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I fell from a crater and stepped off
It was burning in the sky like a heaved Molotoff
Crashed onto the earths crust
I tried to move my muscles but it was like moving a hinge with rust
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Joe Breunig 28 November 2006

An intriguing write; you pull a lot of ideas together; will need more think to think this piece through.

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