Friday, May 9, 2014

Before Hurrying On Comments

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Along the lake's edge, pale reeds lie broken.
Ducks disturb the surface: they spell
their message with a single letter,
forever vanishing, forever reappearing.
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Daniel Brick
forever red Ducks broken children fish
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Valsa George 17 August 2014

Some fleeting scenes are made immortal! Enjoyed the simple elegance of this poem!

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Anand Brown 14 May 2014

Excellent little poem. Simple and absorbing.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 May 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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Daniel Brick

Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
Daniel Brick
Daniel Brick
St. Paul MN
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