Thursday, June 11, 2009

Before Death Comes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before death comes, I'll sing to you,
a melody of dying,
okay on the outside,
but deep within,
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david lessard
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Patti Masterman 03 August 2009

This is killer. The first line of the first two verses, establishes the theme. The next one begins an explanation, and the last one continues with the main idea; ending with 'Cause it's the only song, the only tune, the only mournful melody I know' Very effective. (like being told exactly why you're going to get a spanking. LOL)

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