Friday, September 5, 2014

Before College: The Day After Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Day After

A haunted wind moans softly through the trees
Its arms aware of new asymmetries,
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Brian Johnston 26 September 2014

Since Merov gave me a 1.0 rating I am interpreting that as the highest possible praise and have awarded this poem a permanent 10.0 that no one can touch.

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Abekah Emmanuel 05 September 2014

Short but very revealing. Indeed the negative impacts of war to humanity cannot be overestimated. How could we live in a world full of atrocities and fear. There will surely be a better day in the future. Another masterpiece from the talented poet..... well done!

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