Thursday, February 9, 2006

Before Breakfast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Believing six things to be wrong
before our breakfast has been made
occurs when coffee isn’t strong
and toast is lacking marmalade.
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gershon hepner
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Willow Moon Pearce 13 February 2006

clever use of the wording..well done! ...............willow

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***** ********* 09 February 2006

I enjoyed your poem very much gershon. You know what a believer I am? The impossible is easy, it's the miracles that take a little time. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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