Monday, November 12, 2007

...Before And Still... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I faltered...
letting all that I hear,
fear, hold dear,
crash before me
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Lee Degnan
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Rosemary Dupree 26 November 2007

So many emotions when into this wonderful poem, very strong write. Thank you for sharing. Rose

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Chuck Toll 19 November 2007

I enjoyed this a lot-strong, focused, direct. Very nicely done!

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David Harris 17 November 2007

Lee another masterly stroke of the pen for all to read. Beautiful and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Meggie Gultiano 16 November 2007

Beautiful..so nicely penned..another remarkable piece of yours, kapatid.. love, Meggie

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Jerry Hughes 12 November 2007

.......................................beautifully written - intent heartbreaking

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Broken Peaces 12 November 2007

I had something going around my head on the same lines, I am jealous because I can't better that piece loved it Lee 20 out of 10 kind heart Chris x

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Lee Degnan

Lee Degnan

Peekskill, NY
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