If I faltered...
letting all that I hear,
fear, hold dear,
crash before me
...
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I enjoyed this a lot-strong, focused, direct. Very nicely done!
Lee another masterly stroke of the pen for all to read. Beautiful and thanks for sharing this my friend. David
Beautiful..so nicely penned..another remarkable piece of yours, kapatid.. love, Meggie
.......................................beautifully written - intent heartbreaking
I had something going around my head on the same lines, I am jealous because I can't better that piece loved it Lee 20 out of 10 kind heart Chris x
So many emotions when into this wonderful poem, very strong write. Thank you for sharing. Rose