Saturday, June 9, 2018

Before An Outing In The Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our love has arisen as the clouds
I am expecting heavy rains on the soil,
Meanwhile you fry some spicy snacks for me.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 14 June 2018

Beautiful romantic poem raining in verses. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2018

Sorry, Please treat it touching instead of roughing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2018

A beautiful poem on love with rain having amusing penmanship and roughing expression. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 June 2018

Your rainy poem makes me venture too to make love poems for all PH including sir you your rains coverage is wonderful its like petrichor ere the rains fall on the floor

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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2018

I am consistently awed by your words. Thank you for sharing this. I am a better person for it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2018

A wonderful poem on love and nature. The rain showers love and happiness this magical write.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2018

A lovely poem! Wonderful photography! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2018

Love and art! Painted in the Rainbow! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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