Tuesday, July 8, 2008

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Rating: 4.1

I take a deep breath and begin to pray
I release that breath and think back on today
Every day is getting a little easier
than the day before the week before
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Tia Maria
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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

It's very rare in people but you seen to have a very forgiving nature. I am a fan of your work so far and have only read the first couple of poems on your list. Can't wait to get the chance to read the rest.

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Stone Granite 13 July 2008

Emotionally strong and powerful.

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Rani Turton 12 July 2008

A strong emotional moment that is beautifully evoked. Thanks, Tia.

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Paul Butters 10 July 2008

I feel your torment as you try to move on but cannot let go. It makes beautiful poetry but I sense at a high emotional price. Well done. Paul.

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Natasha Dementia 09 July 2008

This is a beautiful poem, I like the style, Much awsum poem! ! ! !

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

eloquent, nice write

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blue 802 08 July 2008

'write it out'this is a 12 but I can only give 10.my poem 'Wait and see' was called 'To you' guess where/who the inspiration came from.Hope I have not offended you. regards Tom

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