Saturday, March 22, 2008

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Exactly what do you e x p e c t............. from me,
every((Is it)) thing?
because ifitis,
I can only GIVE you,
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Kara Towe 23 December 2011

We can only give what we can give. Some people ask too much, wear us down, because they are selfish, (weak) . It is the strong who are humble, and your poem depicts this to me. Great write, food for thought, we should all reevaluate ourselves, like the old saying says, don't throw pearls at swine. Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for sharing :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2008

..well said...........................10

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