Friday, February 25, 2005

Beetle Crap Comments

Rating: 2.3

A beetle shat upon my eye,
while I was sleeping soundly
beneath my favourite willow tree
it was an act of love.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 September 2005

I enjoyed this...very mellow :)

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Sandra Osborne 28 February 2005

well, I did enjoy Allans comment, so true. Strange piece Herbert, but I liked the ending.

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poem hater 25 February 2005

i am not sure whether this was supposed to be funny but it made me laugh.

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Michael Shepherd 25 February 2005

Such tender, sharp observation of nature...Newton had it easy compared. And I love the deep Freudian subtext to the autobiography. Today your pillowslip is not showing.

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