Saturday, March 17, 2012

Beep, Beep! Flowers Weep - Bitten By The Human Bug! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Slowly, gently, blooms appear - dressed in hues multitude
Peppering the air with a scented aroma in the solitude,
Ripening buds, on each a dewdrop, the pearl jigs in bebop!
With the sun's rays, in dance flowers and twigs are, a pop!
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Harindhar Reddy
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Queeny Gona 28 March 2012

Beep, Beep! Flowers Weep - Bitten by the Human Bug! The title of the poem itself portraying the simile you wanna put before the readers. Enjoyed the rhyming and meaning of the poet's soul.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a nice review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 18 March 2012

interesting way to describe faces of our souls connecting them with nature. it gives the poem a great deep meaning, the things we should think about and notice in our mind. good written verse.i like it and give you 10 :)

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

It's a nice comment to read your review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Unwritten Soul 18 March 2012

I dont want to tell about the sound, it always great sound..but i love the meaning and lines you produced like Reds, blues, violets and pinks with souls in the meadow and But their spirit ravish and they mourn - bitten by human bug... What a symphony of calla lilies, roses and marigold done here....! _Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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