Wednesday, November 17, 2004

Beep - Beeep Comments

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A line of cars - about nineteen,
had stopped behind me.
No obstacle was to be seen,
you ask 'why should this line be'.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 September 2005

Cute poem...nice read!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 17 November 2004

Most certainly - stops traffics and controls heart beat.Wouldn't miss her even if she had more bad habits.

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Lenchen Elf 17 November 2004

So, she's a Traffic-stopper then: -)

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