Sunday, October 2, 2011

Been There. Comments

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We’ve all begged for love at some time, as we lay in deep despair
And the hopelessness that crowds our mind, isn’t really there.
We watch couples walking down the street or lovers on a bus
And what our hearts could give, for once, if those couples could be us!
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Vipins Puthooran 02 October 2011

Excellent write, , , it's a great poem...Love is everywhere to save us from despair, depression but when it's conditional and has no heartfelt fellings... It just a show...

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Stefanie Fontker 02 October 2011

I have never seen 'The Seven Deadly Sins' as well, deadly sins. Is it wrong to want more, to feel good? As long as one is hurt, I don't see the problem. Great writing, you've inspired thought here, that's a sign you're a great poet.

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