He had shared a bed with success,
Heaven-kissing hills bowed at his feet.
He had grown taller than height,
his head scraped the sky when he strode.
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amazing you have this way of writing that is unique and i think thats grat that you let ur personality show through your writing.
Outstanding writer, your ability to use such ways of expression is remarkable. A sign of a fine poet. This is a well compossed write, that bursts with emotion. 10/10 best wishes Jon