Monday, August 4, 2008

Beelzebub's Barflies Comments

Rating: 5.0

The happiness that once swelled a proud expansive chest
has since subsided. Concavely, I must lament a dire and calamitous defeat;
my unholy reunion with the drink is now all too fatally complete.
Never a slave to any master, only the occasional scantily dressed mistresses
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Ted Sheridan
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Tsira Goge 11 September 2008

I cannot and don’t possess any answers or cures for the chronic lies and disease. ............................................................. Remarkable thinking, magnificent poems, and the philosophy is even better///10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Ophelia Payne 07 August 2008

Yes Ted how seductive the liquid love can be #10

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Thad Wilk 05 August 2008

A splendid and poignant write Ted! A pleasure always, to read your poems! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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My comment on the forum stands.... and I learn a lesson from this also, Ted. t x

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