Thursday, August 29, 2019

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He remembered when he lived on the farm.
Then he could weather any storm.
His move to the big city was a huge mistake.
To survive he just didn't have what it takes.
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Lamar Cole
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2019

A wonderful poem with a great rhythm! Beautifully drafted....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 August 2019

A well composed poem, sir Lamar...10++++

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