Friday, November 12, 2010

Bee Sting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Woe to the man,
Who is stung by a bee.
So if you can,
Get up and flee.
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Juan Olivarez
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Pranab K Chakraborty 13 November 2010

You might not realize, / But the stingers in you Well written with intelligent metaphor. Lucid but poetic with perfect rhyme.10/10 Regards, pranab

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