Sunday, November 4, 2018

Bee Sense Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seems as if those bees bear no common sense
Of late they have built a hive in a cornice of my house
I know not what prompts them to come here
May be a few pots close by with roses blooming there
...
Read full text

DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
COMMENTS
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 November 2018

Many many thanks.......Rose Marie........I am so much obliged

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 November 2018

What a lovely poem. In a few seconds I was able to take a glimpse of these bees.roaming around a house with blooming roses. Beautifully crafted write with superb imagery.10++++

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

And left with marks of pheromone on my sleeves Back home with a lesson bitter- sweet But they are wonderful souls excelling us in many a respect Like in smell, touch, taste.....touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem having fear and humor has been nicely executed.10

0 0 Reply
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 November 2018

I always love reading your reviews as they are inspiring and do touch my heart......Kumarmaniji...... May God bless you always to excel all other poets of your day....thank you very much

0 0
Close
Error Success