Sunday, April 22, 2018

Bee Comments

Rating: 4.7

If you are sweet
the bee buzz around to steal
If you try to steal
the bees flies behind to sting
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Rini Shibu
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

If you are sweet the bee buzz around to steal........wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 August 2018

Sadly yes, Rini, the bee is always there to buzz around whether to steal or to kill.. A lovely poem. So cutely short.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 May 2018

Bees may be sweet as they produce honey but if a bee takes you otherwise thousands come to attack with that bee.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

A short sweet poem Rini...Thanks for sharing...10

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, Sweetness may be a trap, as you say An invitation to the unscrupulous, to give a try. But it is always better to be sweet than bitter For, He has given us all, a sweet tooth. And, of course, my wife is so sweet She has got high sugar in her blood.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2018

This beautiful brevity has loveliest metaphors. A mesmerizing read. I love the way your thoughts go, Rini. Brilliant! A 10 and more for the vote.

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Seamus O Brian 23 April 2018

Is it not better to give than to receive? (Especially stings) :)

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Kostas Lagos 23 April 2018

Another remarkable poem Rini!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such a wonderful poem🤓🤓🤓...10++++

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Lamar Cole 23 April 2018

This is a very nice poem about bees.

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Robert Murray Smith 22 April 2018

Rini. a great metaphor and so true.

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Practicing Poetess 22 April 2018

Do not- - No, Never! - - Try to steal the bee's honey or meat. Unless you are a beekeeper, and are well-covered. Cute poem about how the bee guards its honey with ferocity.

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Sandra Feldman 22 April 2018

Never thought of bees that way But your charming poem Did my feelings sway. Enjoyed very much!

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