Sunday, May 30, 2010

Bedtime Stories (Good Night) Comments

Rating: 2.8

The night is young and so are we,
My fairy tale of you and me will again soon be a reality.
Trials and tribulations we must encounter,
It do not matter so longst we live happily ever after.
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Anita Khelawan
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 July 2010

========================= Soliloquizing…exalted …exuberance… ebullience…proliferating…cobwebbing…entanglement…of emotions and noetic joy ride….enjoyed…your style… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 ===================

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A nice poem of adolescent thinking. your way of writing is quite interesting. There's a dialogue always. A touch of intimacy. Fine word choice. Plz read my poems and comments. My poems on love and rain.

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