Monday, May 19, 2014

Bedsheet Of Your Ugly Deeds Comments

Rating: 0.0

Last night, the doctor of my mind made a decision,
To put my rage aside, to do a worthy commitment,
You, the golden flower, blooming within my region,
Love, one day, I promise, get you my heart sent.
...
Read full text

Vishal Sharma
COMMENTS
Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2015

title of your poem is so attractive and relevant i like it very much. i am a fan of yours thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.

0 0 Reply
Kevin Patrick 19 May 2014

My heart is trying to stop the growth of those weeds, That once, gifted me my talent, to love you, my passion. LOVE those two lines from this very fine work, its hard to let things go that trouble us, but in the long run the memories fade away like old wounds. Great work

0 0 Reply
Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Hello poet friend Vishal. You have penned ager, emotion, passion, many feelings in this poem, well written, I enjoyed. I just posted my poem An Old Soldier along with the musical recitation. If you have time, please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Loyd

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success