Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Bedroom Beast! Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's something lurking in my room
It hides beneath my bed
I called my dad to come and help
But he just laughs instead
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Simon Gowen
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John Brown 11 September 2013

OK Simon, I'll tell them. Great poem.

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Heather Wilson 03 May 2012

A wonderful poem, I smiled all through it. I always looked under the bed as a child convinced there was a monster hiding there.

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Valerie Dohren 02 May 2012

Very good, very amusing - you may like to read mine entitled The Ghost.

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Simon Gowen

Simon Gowen

West Midlands - UK
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