Monday, April 2, 2018

Bedlam Comments

Rating: 5.0

Usually makes us laugh but casually cry,
Through the bedlam if you pass by,
Don't talk to a freak,
Abusive words he may speak,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 06 April 2018

Not a place I would pass by For I would be petrified Whenever they speak My knees will go weak And my fear intensified Thanks for the fun sir

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Marieta Maglas 02 April 2018

There are so many wonderful animals in desperate need of homes. People should try to give these abandoned animals a second chance. Adoption is a method to improve the lives of so many unwanted animals. Firstly, they need love and protection. Wonderful poem, voted 10.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2018

Absolutely right. Yes, they don't have cognition of what is right and wrong. An interesting poem well penned.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 April 2018

It is true and you are right. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful message.

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