Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Bed Time Comments

Rating: 4.1

Here I am struggling to say I love you
A hundred times more in the short time
I have left before I know I have to go to bed
Fighting to stay awake in the mean time
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Aarif Ameen 02 April 2009

good work i may read you as i get time take care

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C. P. Sharma 25 February 2009

Beautiful, true weariness of body but ever lingering dreamiless of love, so well penned. CP

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

too sad....nice work..it seems you poured your feelings mixed with tears not only on the pillow....but n your poetic lines too......sebastine...

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Saint Cynosure 03 November 2008

So sad and yet so good...

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cherry poppins 28 October 2008

thats a good poem.

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