Friday, May 3, 2013

Bed Time Comments

Rating: 4.0

Do you talk in bed?
Or do you read instead.

Or do you both lay there
In silence. Wondering where
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David Wood
COMMENTS
Pamela Sinicrope 10 September 2015

This one is my favorite for the sense of humor and the subject matter. It could use some editing.... Would be worth it. Love!

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Francie Lynch 28 May 2014

Great ideas. Rhythm could use an edit.

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R.benjamin Abate 17 July 2013

This one takes me places. Thought provoking as well. Thank You.

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

nice write. what will you do if you sleep alone? Mentally write a poem.

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Vijay Sai R 11 May 2013

a nice piece of bed-time poetry

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Joan Smith 10 May 2013

Absolutely spot on.. Nice

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Valsa George 08 May 2013

Each one may have a special pattern of going to sleep! Some may pore over a book, some may watch a T.V programme, some, vacantly look into the dark, the prudent ones may plan for the next day and some may turn and toss in bed! Strange and varied are the ways of men! A delightful read!

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Ruth Walters 04 May 2013

ha ha, I loved this little poem, it was as if you were talking to me, asking me about the noises I can hear through the walls of my little home :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 May 2013

rightly wrote we must be alert all the time to stop the crime full urn I enjoyed the style I like this Mr.David Thank u

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Hans Vr 03 May 2013

Wonderful ending of this pleasant poem

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Valerie Dohren 03 May 2013

I'm an insomniac David, so I just lie there, trying to compose poems - but not always achieving. Good one.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 May 2013

To go to bed with a kiss is something not to miss. thanks. pure love.

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Babatunde Aremu 03 May 2013

A wonderful poem. I like it

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