Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Bed Of Roses Or Thorns. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ooh man, life could well
be a bed of roses
If only love alone
sprinkled from the hoses.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2018

If only love flowed like an endless stream.............I so pity the lovelorn, the lovesick, the forlorn whose lover flew out the window last morn.... a very nice poem. full of imagination and facts. wedlock, love marital bond.. thank u dear poet . tony

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Rebecca Navarre 01 May 2018

Beautifully Expressed! ! ! ! ! Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Marilyn Lott 17 April 2015

Love is very complex, you put it so well.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 24 December 2014

I'm glad, i'm not the only one to have made a mistake of calling you a sir, should show your face when you get a chance to do so.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 24 December 2014

With this composure, you are indeed a rose, just had to read this again. Thanks!

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Kaikubad Ali 10 June 2014

awesome..... this poor bug can only be astonished with open mouth to read this poem....: D

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Melikhaya Zagagana 18 April 2014

Makes us hold on to what we have and what we know, may be that 'if' is all we need. i love this poem i really do, i have never been so honest about loving something like this.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 February 2014

Hmm im not a sir, im a lassie, lady poetess

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Mohammed Jafer 24 February 2014

Very sweet poem sir. Words are just awesome...

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Md Elias Uddin 21 February 2014

If only love flowed like an endless stream If only love didn't end like a dream. TRUE!

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Bursting with beauty. Well done my friend!

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April Pearl 11 February 2014

The poem's about lovers who last long in blissful wedlock despite all the struggles...good one

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Lyn Paul 10 February 2014

A Great title expressing beautiful words. Thank you

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Kanav Justa 10 February 2014

I so pity the lovelorn, the lovesick, the forlorn whose lover flew out the window last morn But I know too of pure loves that outlast the storms for one, they didn't begin in high school dorms. mm love these lines, , , , this is a beautiful write, , ,

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Melikhaya Zagagana 09 February 2014

Majestic piece, took my breath away, thanks.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 February 2014

amazing 10+

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 February 2014

I so pity the lovelorn, the lovesick, the forlorn whose lover flew out the window last morn cultures may differ, but the feelings are the same...Good poem on chastity...

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Mohammed Albalushi 06 February 2014

If only love didn't end like a dream. amazing

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Zahra Shariat 05 February 2014

antonym of love that made it attractive, thank u lady!

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Md Elias Uddin 03 February 2014

In all certainty, the antonym of love plunges you in the bed of thorns Much unlike the agile yet peaceful dove love grows weeds, rust and horns!

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