Monday, October 5, 2009

Bed Of Roses Comments

Rating: 2.7

Who stole your scented memories
pot-pourri’s of your youth with
vacant promises – a charlatan
a superficial swain with wisdom
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Ivan Donn Carswell
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Hakeem Rahim 06 May 2011

Long time scribe in arms. Beautiful dedication written tenderly and in reflection. Thank you for this.

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Onelia Avelar 08 October 2009

'marriage bed is still a bed of blooming roses' - this is such a wonderful declaration of love. I like your filigreed style in love poetry.

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