Bed Of Flowers Comments

‘…all my five senses are reaching out to you // but you're not there // and i don't know what to do….’ One more sense left the 6th …very powerful and that make love a LOVE Thanks for sharing Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

Captivating opening stanza beautifully summed up in the last. CP

so i'll lie in this bed of flowers until you finally arrive and in my heart i know that our hearts will both entwine. until finally u make it for me... beautiful poem with deeep thought n romatic too....10 read mine.....home bound... come home... no separate ways and divorce

A poem that painted a beautiul painting................ Good Write........

Lovely piece of love...title is really good...Nice lines

a sad song with lovely flowers beside you...a true loss

I absolutely love the beginning.. Nice work Louis Krista

In the language of flowers, this one is captivating.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

very beautiful......I liked it a lot

Beautiful, never said this before.. but i wish those words were mine... lol... I love it big bro!