Sunday, September 30, 2007

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My bed, it offered little comfort,
While tears oh silently fell.
I wrapped myself away from the world,
Felt trapped in my own personal hell.
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Daniel Adams
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Bonnie Harding 30 September 2007

Nicely written Daniel....well done

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Aldo Kraas 30 September 2007

This poem is very good It has a balance The feelings are so true

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