Saturday, September 28, 2013

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She swam in her delirium in an unfamiliar semi-darkness
Around her an ocean in slow motion engulfed her dizzy senses
Voices from a faraway space echoed garbled in her straining ears
She flew past all horizons wings spanning across many light years.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Tribhawan Kaul 29 September 2013

Very nice imagery created of a patient under anesthesia. Very good poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 September 2013

very good write, I like it, thanks.

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