Monday, May 28, 2012

Bed Comments

Rating: 4.5

Slip into cool sheets
under the cover
Two people meet
You and your lover
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Robert Green
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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

And nothing could be its better definition Sir.Well conceptualized

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Angel Teukie Teukie 05 July 2012

I read your poem just the way you describe it :) Hearts that raced is exactly how I read it. Lovely.

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Thomas Duncky 30 May 2012

Great poem and i have just read it at the right time. I will do just what the last line says! Keep writing Bert. :)

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