Becoming Zen Comments

This is a lovely hymn of peaceful connection with the world. Robert

Especially feeling the last line, Lori, but again, your ability to craft words into poetry is amazing.

Wonderful food for thought Lori, this is a joy. Hugs Anna xxx PS Thanks for your kind comments.

Excellent closing lines-the poem opens up into the reader's world with those words. Good work.

'cast my soul up to the sky for I no longer need it it was never really mine to begin with' Love this Lori. Captured my interest immediately. Thank you.

Nice Lori. I particularly like the way the last line seems to hang in the air...

Lovely poem. Sounds more pantheist than Zen but none the worse for that.