* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational) Comments

simply inspiring... thank you for sharing

this is the stuff you need to be righting, this is my most favoriote poem you have ever written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the best poem i have read in a long time! ! ! ! ! (10 and way more! ! !)

Eyan, this is a living proof of excellency, well penned like the rest of your poems, keep it up, WISDOM is not a priviledge, it is a gift given to us by GOOD to be share with the rest of the world....Love and Peace,10++++

great poem injoyed reading it....9

Nice Work of Words... I Especially Like The First Stanza... MoonBee

Hello I read a few of your poems about 4-I really like this one the best-you have a way about you in your writing that I have never felt in reading others work-keep up the good work- Your poems speak about pain and loss in love-you have a lot of passion-keep writing-

excellent spoken like a true poet

Hi Eyan, I like this, its buzzy....... Good choice of words, Gave you a 6...... Ferg

HI Best inspirational poem. Will motivatethe youngers To become the first in life Nice Desir

kepp going with your good job love the poem especially when i started to read at the begging i couldnt stop reading, , what a beautifull poem

Where the fires burn The oil of ambition Intensifies its heat Nice

Hard work builds champions wonderful abstract poem 10++++++++++

This must surely be inspirational - - it is dripping with first class poetry - - well written from first to last line.....10/10 from Fay.

As your poem states, it takes ambition, perseverance, and hard work to 'Become the Best' in arousing one's mind, by divine guidance [if ones desire] or self induced or encouragement from others, the outcome is the same. a good write and a 10

you're already the best, you know wa? you're strong enough to crush the opposition

inspirational is not my thing, but interesting descriptions.

This poem is so beautiful =] i really enjoyed reading this =]

very inspirational and great write 10

The tips given to become the best will be very useful to the readers.

Now this is really excellent and I love 'the touch of an angel' as it touched my heart. A great inspirational poem Eyan. 10 love Karin